This is some great writing. Loved “If her tips were downloadable I wouldn’t owe my boyfriends to her in the first place!”.
But write it in 3rd person, and not 1st. Looks more professional and legitimate. -Animesh
animesh da i tried to convert it in third person..but somehow it lost the feel as almost all the lines had to be altered. what to do?
Write it like a story. Give it a try.
chek and tell me wht modificatns are to be added
Hello! I am Monalisa Nandi and precisely speaking I am the author of a fashion blog. I’ll understand if people who know me well raise their eyebrows on reading this because my reaction ,after my friend Deepa Sharma came to me with the idea of starting a fashion blog, also included free viagra canadian pharmacy a shrill “WHAAAAT??” tailed by fits of laughter in addition to the dramatically animated eyebrows. Once silenced by her commanding glare, the first question that darted across was “Why would I do it?” followed immediately by a more confusing one “Why not?”.
Then began the whole sequence of brain activities commenced by a B.Tech trained mind-
1. PRACTICAL APPLICATION OF THE EXPERIMENT:
Why would anybody read a fashion blog?
The answer literally giggled at my face as I pictured canadian pharmacy meds myself dialing Deepa’s number before every single date, college get together, party, girls’ day out, formal presentation or any other event where the proper ensemble could create a colossal transformation. If her tips were downloadable I wouldn’t owe my boyfriends to her in the first place!
2. AIM OF THE EXPERIMENT-
Cleaning out the closet!
YES, people end up wasting there wardrobe space with clothes that look great
on their fictional avatars. (Just need to lose the tire around my waist and I’ll rock this dress!) Get real. You look great. Your clothes don’t!
Creativity and dedication: HIGH
Technical knowledge: NIL
So basically the blog had reduced to a theoretical concept with no hope of practical implementation like so many ground-breaking ideas I have had since childhood. To make it functional in the real world we http://canadianpharmacy-norxdrugs.com/ needed someone who was already experienced in creating and running blogs. Programming, format specification, canadian pharmacy meds linking websites …. Just name it and the answer is Animesh Ray!
Trailing recent developments in the fashion loop and accessing invaluable information from websites, to update our fashion databank.
Identifying what people needed most. And that ranges from anything to everything- Tips for bridal dressing to teenagers shopping with a bust wallet.
Compressing the extensive knowledge, without compromising the important details, to write-ups consuming a few minutes of your busy day.
Intertwining Animesh’s knowledge, Deepa’s insight as a fashion adviser, my research skills and working as a team to clad people in garbs enhancing their individuality instead of blending them into a glitzy background.
Experiment seems feasible. So it’s worth a really good shot.